The song didn't do much for me--it was boring (especially the rhyme scheme), poorly written, and had no interesting imagery. There's also absolutely zero personality in her voice. If I had to choose, I'd take personality over pitch-perfect singing. The auto-tune actually had more personality than she did...
The production was good, but I have one suggestion: you had a half-time feel throughout the song (snare on beat 3), and I would have liked to have seen the chorus go into double time (snare on 2 and 4), which might have made it 'pop'. Or maybe vice versa with the chorus in half-time. But there's only so much you can do with bad writing and uninteresting phrasing...