Check my songs out fellas

[RedsCeltics34]

I'm 18 & I rap. www.myspace.com/ratedr2k6

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6028214216d8b882/ - Another song by Me (1st & 2nd verse) & my boy Script

I have plenty more but check my 2 songs out on that site called "Like You" (just recorded today), I sang for the 1st time in my life on this song so don't make fun of me! & the other is "Still Fly" .. yes they have a few swears but I'm sure all of us are old enough to hear a few swears 

Just looking for some feedback from some new people. Older or Young, doesn't matter.

Let me know what you think. Much appreciated 

[Roy Hobbs]

Nice job.  I thought "Still Fly" was pretty tight.  "Like You" isn't really my style, but I credit you for putting it out there.

[RedsCeltics34]

Nice job.  I thought "Still Fly" was pretty tight.  "Like You" isn't really my style, but I credit you for putting it out there.

Thanks a lot Roy.

[ManUp]

I'm with Hobbs.

"Like Me" isn't really my style. I've never really been into those type of tracks in general. "So Fly" is pretty nice track, but you let the nice hook carry you a bit. Keep working at it your pretty good.

[Truck Lewis]

I think Still Fly is dope and sounds marketable in my opinion, not my opinion means muchs since im not any type of expert, but i listen to alot of hiphop, rap, and r&b

I like Like You also, but it does sound like it could use a lil cleaning up.  Sounded like it might lend itself to a sick autotune hook

[RedsCeltics34]

Thanks guys. 

& Truck Lewis, I know I could have used autotune but I chose not too, I wanted it to be my regular voice.

[Celtics1990]

I have to say my favorite was definately "Shut da F*** up".  I was also feeling "Still Fly".  I liked how you didn't just rap over the original Big Tymers beat, you made it your own.

[Redz]

Definitely not my cup `o' tea, but sounds like you know you know what you're doing.

"I like it cushy, so I can do somersaults in it"  (might not have got the words exactly right there, but you know the one I'm talking about).

Nice work and good luck with it.

[RedsCeltics34]

I have to say my favorite was definately "Shut da F*** up".  I was also feeling "Still Fly".  I liked how you didn't just rap over the original Big Tymers beat, you made it your own.

yea "Shut da f*** up" (Wish they woulda let me on it  ) is one of my favorite songs EVER. Its even in with REAL rappers its an amazing song, Credit to my 2 boys for that track, were all a crew tryna get noticed right now.

[RedsCeltics34]

Definitely not my cup `o' tea, but sounds like you know you know what you're doing.

"I like it cushy, so I can do somersaults in it"  (might not have got the words exactly right there, but you know the one I'm talking about).

Nice work and good luck with it.

Thanks Redz. & yea thats my friend Jordan's line 

[RedsCeltics34]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6028214216d8b882/ - Another song by me (1st & 2nd verse) & my boy Cliff

I Also put it in the original post.