Check out my first video!

[JSD]

Tell me what you think 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qE5a7p2Ac9c

[JSD]

Is it that bad?

[kw10]

man, that's as bad as that Houston ROckets team you put together 

hahaha...that was good, I enjoyed that. Only complaint-the music at the start while P was still talking, if you got rid of that part of the music, it would be awesome. TP.

[Roy Hobbs]

I thought it was really good, especially for a first effort.

The one constructive criticism:  I think you stuck with Paul's speech too much.  I think people clicking on that link want to see a highlight mix, and 50 seconds of speaking -- roughly 20% of your mix -- is maybe too much.  You want to grip people right away.  I actually liked that you put the music in behind Paul's speech; if you cut the video to right about where you come in with the music, I think the video itself would have better flow.  (The whole speech isn't that important, just the "we'll get 'em next year" part.)

Nice job.

[JSD]

man, that's as bad as that Houston ROckets team you put together 

hahaha...that was good, I enjoyed that. Only complaint-the music at the start while P was still talking, if you got rid of that part of the music, it would be awesome. TP.

Well If it was as badass as that Rockets team it would be one of the best videos ever assembled 

[JSD]

I thought it was really good, especially for a first effort.

The one constructive criticism:  I think you stuck with Paul's speech too much.  I think people clicking on that link want to see a highlight mix, and 50 seconds of speaking -- roughly 20% of your mix -- is maybe too much.  You want to grip people right away.  I actually liked that you put the music in behind Paul's speech; if you cut the video to right about where you come in with the music, I think the video itself would have better flow.  (The whole speech isn't that important, just the "we'll get 'em next year" part.)

Nice job.

Thanks Roy I appreciate the feedback.

The reason I put the entire Pierce speech in is because I wanted it to be clear to casual fans that this was given the year before the "08" run. I do think you have a good point as "this time next year" might be a better time to start the video.

[Celtic]

I like the whole speech in the beginning, just fade the music back more so you can hear Paul better, and cut the ending at the word now during the crowd shot, it's a more natural ending, rather than repeating the crowd shot to finish the song. Or you could put in some parade footage, that is usually missing from a lot of mixes.

[JSD]

Alright, I got some good feedback and suggestions on here so I wanted to share the final version .

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qE5a7p2Ac9c

[Roy Hobbs]

Looks great.  TP.