I'd give you a 5 or 6 out of 10.
You have some okay moments but your pitch is way out of tune.
Try singing without headphones on so you can hear yourself.
The biggest mistake people make is listening to the song they're trying to sing (whilst singing), and they get comfortable without adjusting their own tune to the songs tune.
Keep working, you have potential. Get a vocal coach but lots of people will laugh at your voice in all honesty. Those same critics would never have the balls to try and sing though.
This, for the most part ... you actually have really nice texture and tone, but you're off-key a lot of the time. I don't think it's a matter of you not being able to recognize it, but rather not
hearing it correctly. I think Chambers is correct in suggesting you use headphones, but I disagree just slightly as I don't think you're listening to the key of the music enough, or matching your voice to it.
Not sure what your mix is, but the music is WAY too soft here, and it's going to be difficult for you to sync your voice to the key of the song if the music itself isn't prevalent enough. Try and get a good balanced mix in your headphones, with your voice clear and easy to hear, but at least some element of the music loud and clear enough as well, so you can hear both and sync the keys up.
Don't worry too much about texture and style yet, cuz you've got a basic amount of that already and it will develop naturally, but work for now on staying on key and training your ear to recognize the difference. Whatever you do, don't get discouraged or let critique get you down, you've got some natural talent, but you just need to start with the basics and the rest will come.
Keep up the good work ... there are thousands of people with talent who never stick with it or give it the time it needs, or who get discouraged because they take constructive criticism personally. You've got to have some thick skin in this business, but you also have to put in many, many hours of hard work and practice, and learn to be good enough to know when you're
not being good enough.
Music is the language of the soul, and whatever else happens, it will bring you joy and happiness at the very least ... if you're willing to commit to it, any rewards beyond that are just icing on the cake. Thanks for sharing ... and always keep your ears
open.
