Just wanted to say I love this piece of writing:
But Pierce wasn't declaring his loyalty — he was trying on the phrase to see how it fit. Under the shouts, Pierce kept talking, sounding more or less like an insurance firm manager settling his affairs after a lateral promotion that moved him from Dayton to Cleveland.
EDIT: Finished the whole piece and it's really awesome writing. Enjoyed it a lot. Stevens worked at Applebees! It's an interesting look into the situation and him in particular.